I decided to change my story around. Originally the focal point was this mischievous gnome and the story was from his point of view, but I realized that I didn't quite like that perspective. I'm reworking the story to be told from the perspective of Nolan Fletcher, the character who comes into possession of the gnome.
you seem to understand the shapes of the character well, but have trouble moving them around, his arms seem to change length in some drawings, try simplifying his design by connecting shapes
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